can someone proofread my essay for grammar errors Plz, and give me pointers?
Thank you.

Sometimes people use opioids to help with an injury but, sometimes people will use opioids just to get high.

“Not all people that use opioids have an addiction.” If someone has some opioids on them, that does not mean that the person with those opioids has an addiction to those opioids. Can you tell who is and who is not using opioids legally or illegally? You can’t tell who is or is not using the opioids that they have legally or illegally.

“How can you tell if someone is using opioids correctly or if that person is using the opioids just to get high?” If someone has a pill bottle of opioids how can your mind immediately go to, maybe he got hurt? If you see that person with a pill bottle of opioids you shouldn’t automatically think they got hurt. If that person is next to you and he has those opioids on them what should you do? If you see that person with a pill bottle of opioids and they are near you, you should be at least a little cautious around that person, because you don’t know what they will do while they are high on the opioids.

What would you do if you were attacked by someone that is high on opioids?
This issue matters because what if your child is attacked by someone that is high on opioids? You don’t know what will happen if someone is on opioids.

Respuesta :

Explanation:

Too much repetition and the length of paragraphs are not consistent.  Other wise it's not that bad.

Quick tip, don't use the word opioids over and over again. It gets annoying to read.

Use pronouns such as them or it.

For example:

Sometimes people use opioids to help with an injury but, sometimes people will use them just to get high.

Something else

Can you tell who is and who is not using opioids legally or illegally? You can’t tell who is or is not using the opioids that they have legally or illegally.

Take out 'the'.

And instead of 'Can you tell who is and who is not using opioids legally or illegally?' say either 'Can you tell who is using opioids legally or illegally?' or 'Can you tell who is and who is not using opioids legally?'

Also paragraph 3, you switch pronouns from he to them. Grammatically, this doesn't make sense.

I hope this helps!