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The boy woke up. Today he and his dad were going fishing. They got in the car. They drove to the lake. They fished from the pier. The sun was hot. The two ate a snack. It looked like they were not catching fish today. Then, the boy caught a fish. It was a great day. Question: Rewrite the paragraph, turning all of the nondescript sentences into more vivid, descriptive language, filled with concrete detail.