Read the following sentence.

The Boston Tea Party showed how angry some people were about England charging more money for tea.

Read the revised sentence: The Boston Tea Party revealed the passionate fury some colonists felt about England taxing their tea.

Why did the writer revise the sentence in this way?

To paint a picture with figurative language
To reorganize ideas in a more logical order
To include a transition word to connect ideas
To use more specific and vivid words