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Abbie's teacher told her she should not use all simple sentences because it makes her writing choppy. Which shows revisions that would correct this problem? A) I went to the Magnolia Mall in Silver City. I went shopping. I went home. I went to bed. B) We went to the movies, and then we went to the mall. After that, we stopped at Cleo's Barbecue for dinner and ordered the daily special. C) Joanna, Cynthia, Jayla, Bonnie, and Lexie went to the mall. They went shopping. They went out to eat at Antonio's Pizzeria. They did not get home until after 11 p.M. D) Cleo's Barbecue has delicious food. Antonio's Pizzeria has delicious food. Everyone likes the food at Cleo's Barbecue. Everyone likes the food at Antonio's Pizzeria.

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The answer is B because it doesn’t use simple sentences all throughout the paragraph.