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The first sentence is wonderful!
The rest of the paragraph (especially what I believe is a thesis) looks pretty weak to me. The second sentence is an opinion, which (depending on the assignment) may or not be what you were trying to go for. Maybe rewrite it a bit, perhaps briefly telling what impact it has on the story. This can lead into the third sentence, which should probably be rewritten to something like:
"Though this quote has many different interpretations, it is about *INSERT YOUR INTERPRETATION HERE*."
The second part, after the comma of that sentence, should be tailored to fit your thesis/claim.
If this is an essay, I suggest you don't use first person ("Me" "I" etc.), unless that is what the assignment asks you to do. I know my teachers usually frown upon using first person in essays though...
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