Respuesta :
B/ Moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph
Explanation// has a transition word to start a new paragraph
Answer:
The revision that would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph is moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph
Explanation:
Moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph would make a summary of the paragraph, which will be the best way to finish it, besides the other options are not possible since it is not necessary to add facts to sentence 2, sentence 4 already has a transition word and, using analogies to describe a restaurant does not give necessary or related information to the paragraph.