Respuesta :
Yasmin's version 1 is more descriptive than version 2. Version 1 gives a detailed description of the place where Yasmin stayed. It was a beautiful place and peaceful. She made a contrast bewteen " civilization" and wildnerness. She gives a description of her body but she finishes with some suspense. Something happened and this disrupted the serenity of the place.
Version 2 . This is not descriptive. Yasmin just enumerates the different actions she did. There is not description of any "beautiful " place. She just tells that her stay was in "peace" and "tranquility". She does not give any detail about her body. There is not suspense,either. She was getting back home ,probably, and she had stories to tell. She did not know which story she would tell first.
Version 1 uses chronological order, building up to the action. Version 2 starts with the conclusion to make readers curious about the beginning.